| Mist surrounds a deep dark moon; Below leaves of innocence lie quiet— shadows revealing untold secrets faded within roots of guilt. Colours turn softly as our world turns itself back. Each moment ticking by transports us slowly to an ice-enchanted place of wonder— barren where none guilty of inhumanity shall reign. All past is void; only ice-aged fields of frozen glass- shall remain. —Michele Cameron Drew |
Copyright ©2009 Michele Cameron Drew. All Rights Reserved.
8 comments:
If only all the past was void
I really loved the images you used in this poem, especially the 'roots of guilt' and the 'ice-aged fields of frozen glass' which express perfectly and beautifully a whole universe of meanings. Have you ever thought of posting your poems on Literature Network Forums? They have a poem section which is very rich, with so many different types of poetry, and what's more: people take the time to read and comment. PS: I'm not the site's owner nor related to it; I just think your poems deserve the largest public possible!
No, I've never checked that out, but I suppose I must do that now...
Thanks for your kind comments. =)
thanks for the beautiful string
I really love the turn of phrase - faded within roots of guilt. Nice
This picture is quite cool (no pun intended for real). I like the ray of light as if offering a ray of hope in the barren lands.
The string the lovely, thanks
Great article, Thanks for your great information, the content is quiet interesting. I will be waiting for your next post.
Post a Comment